DARA WIER. Remnants of Hannah. Wave Books. $14

 

 

reviewed by CYNTHIA ARRIEU KING

 

 

The first time I heard Dara Wier read in person, she was reading from her book Reverse Rapture. She was sitting at a table. Medium sized auditorium. I don’t think I’ve ever been so blown away by a public reading. She opened up the possibility that writing about the bucolic, the small, the tender, the ephemera and the fantastic that we usually pass by could really be about what is happening right now, in our foreign policy. She seemed to be pointing at and framing the American way not of disappearing suddenly by virtues (as one would in the Rapture), but its reverse: of appearing out of nowhere with what cannot necessarily be defined as virtues, of an invasion by monsters. Suddenly appearing overseas. Suddenly dominating. Suddenly obfuscating the lines of journalism, lying to the masses, and doublespeak. The poems then were stirring, and shocking through careful inventions, rather than something shrill. The absence of shrillness creates pressure and yields the truly upsetting poem. Think poetry of the abyss (Frost’s Directive) shocking with an element of the science fictional, the abstruse, and the completely and carefully observed truth.

So I heard that this new book was much like an account found, or the remnants of a person, of a ghost. But I wasn’t prepared for Wier’s return to the subjects of Reverse Rapture and, in doing so, emphatically stress the importance of what sometimes seems lost in poems – having a genuine subject – a salient, pressing worldly matter rather than one interior, playful, or simply surreal. And Wier seems to bypass traditions of narrative and the surreal to communicate the loss of sense, politically, patriotically. She uses vertiginous distances, and quiet allusions and metaphors from nature and the shapes of thought.  All these qualities add up to a lyrical interrogation of America, one devoid of pop diction, and cluttering references.

You know that dejected feeling you’ve had after watching the news or a press conference. Wier chooses to mine the way one thinks and the way sentences fit together for a suitable metaphor. In the “Attitude of Rags,” she begins the poem and the book:

 

It felt like a story sorry it’d lost all its sentences,

Like a sentence looking for its syntax. (13)

 

Right off the bat, she’s prepared us for a book where syntax may mutate or need rehabilitation and tells us this might be about a story we know. She goes on, “All of the words had homeless, unemployed, orphan/written all over their faces…” causing the reader to think of the neglected. But these poor-faced words are left to hang: the mind of the poem goes back to the original task, trying to delineate its boundaries, its incarnations. You notice, “It looked the way a fence looks just after the last/Stampede. A big old blood-colored barn collapsed in/its tracks. Out of hiding came all the hidden cameras.” So the story can be the current story of America and, at the same time, the story of the poem’s voice, and Voice, capital V. This allows the poem to critique something by giving an exposed version of that something’s means and duplicity.

There’s criticism implicit in every personified abstraction:

 

It was the kind of day in which emotions roaming from

Town to town, free to be themselves, enjoyed their

Rich fantasy lives. This was the kind of day that day

was. We were rags in the hands of a narcoleptic duster. (13)

 

The anger behind “rich fantasy lives” burns after the deceptively free and light appositional phrases. They meander: no biggie, but they’re deluded. The sudden appearance of the lyric “we” and the use of such a quotidian and sad object as rags helps Wier say what this anger was about – the story is just a cloth used to clean and cover the truth. That the person dusting is falling asleep -- insensible -- only makes that person all the more politically culpable and identifiable.

In “Injured Books,” Wier finds another metaphor for sense by the Mobius strip-like assertion that “Near the top of each page a new story would begin, go on for a while, reach the end of the page, and never end.” How can that make sense, yet how can we not imagine the endless possibilities of mutated stories, stories that go one but cannot be finished before a new one comes along? The political import of one story nudging aside another seems to lie dormant during the prose poem until the lyric we once more asserts a moral tone: “We took these books with us to our desert islands.” The confusion created among citizens by undependable communications with our leaders can only lead to self-isolation – to puzzle things out if not escape.

The lyric “we” and the leader appear again and again throughout the book. The “we”’s are allowed moral exercise, examination, and recuperation: “Everyone spent the next three days practicing/Free will” as if it weren’t coming naturally anymore to choose a fate “Independence” (15); “We call it the sun, but that’s not what it is” marking the purported life-giving star as misleading or disguised like administrative announcements. (“Alexia by Other Means” 40). The we’s know that self-examination of how one affects others is needed even if not happening: “We hadn’t yet begun to take ourselves apart/Oil was just beginning to know what it was.” (“Was” 56).  The leader shows up as a Scout whose notebook lists “rationalizations, recipes…schemes time-saving some focus/Central it’s as to have seems mainly knots of untying and tying of theologies rash the way they went.” (“Some Not So Nearly Apocalyptic Borders…” 53). The crushed syntax of these lines emphasizes the confusion, the pressing together of quick fixes to solve a larger problem. Again, Wier uses the alternate name Scout for the President or his administration to mirror the way that administration refers to reality with names that cover their true nature. Yet the effect is not so much that of doublespeak, but of sadness, casting about for a way to speak of the problem, and an incrimination of that lack.

The natural beauty always inherent in Wier’s poetry also keeps this sadness from bombast or easiness. The ants, the spiders, the “leeches and maggots were back in business  (“Early Morning Ecological Radio” 21) seem to serve a few allusive if not allegorical purposes. The ants seem to be tireless citizens going about their business as we mostly do. The spider “drops from a thread where the envelope is sealed” is if menacingly connected with actual motives or even truth (“ Last Words” 20). Even the sun seems to stand for something like sense when those with no names might be freed from their Platonic caves: “Which one of us will claim possession of the sun?” (“Riding With Plato on a Northbound Train” 50). 

Finally, in “Incident on the Road to the Capital” we find a wolf that had “grown tired of his character” and wanted to change into something “more vicious, more deadly” (29). And after the “I” converses with him under a tree in which birds “with gaudy chromatic feathers” are perched, she notes that he didn’t seem like “a very serious wolf. I think he was missing a real opportunity” (30). Though a more obvious incarnation for our nation’s leader, the wolf receives a hopeful assessment from the speaker – ironic and pained too – that perhaps he was overlooking a role while looking for a new one, a role that would benefit more than himself.

It is tempting to say these poems are innovative and endearing, except for the matter of their dangerous observations. It sticks like a pin or pins out of every poem. The voice cautions and lulls alternately. While the structure of Reverse Rapture felt epic or at least like murals, these poems prove the quotidian’s relationship to these moral questions, the permanence of the problem and the stamina of observation and attention the matter demands. Not what we always think of as the project of poetry, but now, we’ve been warned and directed – not through narrative nor harangue nor even easy surrealism -- to notice our helplessness and to question inaction:  “I deny I’m a part of any of this” (“Circumference” 46)…“There wasn’t any difference between what we started/Or we finished, or so said our new circular arguments” (“Was” 56). The circular arguments crafted in strange syntax, far drops and distances, point to a real, political silence. Even Poe, like a ghost, demands in the epigraph, “I will not go until I hear from you.”