Skirmish by Dobby Gibson
Greywolf
Press, 2009
Reviewed by
Ben Kopel
No hope—see,
thatÕs what gives me guts.
The Minutemen
I donÕt have a fight
song,
yet isnÕt that alone
reason enough to fight?
Dobby Gibson
What exactly is a
skirmish? Think of it as a misunderstanding, a moment of confusion that gets
your heart rate going and your fists tightened up. It is the space where our
wires get tangled and the information gets a little roughed up. What is so
refreshing about the poems in Dobby GibsonÕs newest collection, titled Skirmish, is how the battles
both small and large that take place over and over again between the covers are
all willing to work with the reader to create a mystery the imagination is
built to experience, rather than solve.
The bookÕs constructive
confusion is born in the meeting of the items and ideas that litter the pages.
As words and images occur and reoccur, they multiply in meaning and take on new
shapes within the poems. This is spelled out in ÔThe World As Seen Through a Glass
of Ice WaterÕ as the mantra: Something happens something happens something
happens./Repetition repetition repetition.
The way the pieces of Skirmish crash into each other
while simultaneously complimenting each other gives way to the moments of human
experience that make GibsonÕs voice such a genuine one. With this comes a great
deal of awe, and with that, aweÕs own moments of doubt. The poems start at the
light of day and make their way chest out and off towards another evening spent
trying to get some decent sleep while the snow piles up outside the window.
Before the snow
returned as the memory
of a thousand snows,
while in sleep, arms
twitched
with the memory of a
thousand shovelings,
each time convincing
ourselves
that it is not suffering
that keeps us here,
it is the chance for
something more beautiful
for being closer to
what we hope
weÕve been dying for
all along.
[from Limerance]
Gibson charges his
words with both an ambiguity and an empathy that encourage the reader to make associations and
separations they would not ordinarily make. This act of trust on the poetÕs
part is often taken for granted, and is one of the great accomplishments of Skirmish. The writer trusts the
reader and the reader trusts the writer. The poems are aware of the balancing
act at hand and use it to their full advantage. By believing in the audienceÕs
ability to Negative Capability their way from line to line and moment to
moment, DobbyÕs poems gain the confidence to both confuse and illuminate in a
single action.
The speakerÕs attention
is able to jump and dodge and duck from the kitchen to Wilt ChamberlainÕs bones
to the Chinese restaurant to an elephant to an ice cream headache. This is not
to say that the poems sound scattershot. They move at the speed of a life in
the process of living and are willing to use time and space to place the reader
firmly in the present in order to make some pretty direct statements about the
shared predicament at hand.
The twenty-two poems
placed throughout the three sections of Skirmish titled ÒFortuneÓ offer
great examples of GibsonÕs strengths and inclinations. They use their smaller
size (usually just a line or two under sonnet-length) to their advantage and compress
language while still allowing the playing field to expand. The Fortunes bolt
from directives to prophesies to promises and back again. They are aphoristic
and yet unfamiliar, speaking directly to the reader and including them in the
action. Take, for example, this Fortune from the end of the second section:
Water always can be
found
in close proximity to
water.
Or so you discover
while
snorkeling in your own
lagoon.
You have to lose her
to truly miss her. Yet
you also have to miss her
to truly appreciate how
lucky you are
that sheÕs never left.
There is very little
you can do now.
Dreams, like wayward
whales, echolocate in the deep.
On this planet, only
humans
can remove their
clothes without fear.
As words and ideas are placed
side by side, we are placed in the middle and experience their odd harmony
firsthand. There is the constant desire to escape, to step away from the
confusion and find some rest there. We are dealing from page one with a speaker
who wants to get out, but not away. Escape is hard and so many have tried and
rather than fail, they often surrender. And yet the lesson learned is that,
instead of avoiding bewilderment and surrendering to sense, the true escape
comes from finding the symmetry inside the conflict. GibsonÕs poems get us out
of a jam by putting us right in the middle of it.
One of the most
entertaining ways Dobby creates balance in his poems is by having someone or
something perform an action (be it a plastic egg, a lonely freshman, a swimmer,
an archeologist) and then following that with another noun performing a
different, seemingly unrelated action. He often uses anaphora to glue the
events together, and the results are always exciting and surprising. Here are
examples from ÔFumageÕ and ÔExit Strategy,Õ respectively:
A janitor flips the
switch,
and the whole school
falls dark.
A wind blows, and a
hundred
umbrellas explode black
in the rain.
**
Another swimmer shakes
the sea
from her ears.
Another archeologist
gasps
as she uncovers the
vase fragment
while another coroner
discovers
yet another reason why,
and another boy with a
balloon
looks into his motherÕs
eyes
and suddenly lets it
go.
Events ignorant of each
other and yet, in GibsonÕs hands, totally connected and breathing through each
otherÕs mouths. The juxtaposition of the nouns and their actions is not as
interested in creating ideas about comparison and contrast as they are in
shining a light on the moment of equivalence. He is using feedback to find the
melody and then we can all sing along. Our escape hatch is located in the
middle of the ruckus, where GibsonÕs materials meet and their meaning blooms
into the communal experience they are trying to communicate. To quote ÒMercy,Ó We
are born in tiny collisions. By we, they mean us. You. And me. And the
speaker. And the poems.
In a recent interview,
Gibson stated that, Òif Frank OÕHara and D. Boon share a lesson for me, itÕs
that you donÕt need a reason to make art other than to delight your friends.Ó
This ideal is at the heart of Skirmish, and yet the book is totally inclusive
to us, the readers, the strangers. The poet trusts us with the task at hand
because we are in this together. Guided by a voice that has faith in our
imaginationÕs ability to play, not along with, but inside the mystery presented
to us, we are able to escape without being torn apart. We are born here and yet
we have never been here before. His poems could be your life. Your life could
be his poems.