Revolver
by
Robyn Schiff
University of
Iowa Press, 2008
Reviewed by
David Carillo
Consider the poem Òde
la RueÕs Envelope MachineÓ in Robyn SchiffÕs second book of poems Revolver. As in most of the poems
in this book, in Envelope Machine we are introduced via the title to what could
be described as a specific object. Many of the poems here are titled after
displays at the Great Exhibition (also known as The Great Exhibition of the
Works of Industry of all Nations or the Crystal Palace Exhibition) that took
place in Hyde Park, London, England from May 1 to October 15, 1851.
De la RueÕs envelope
machine was one such wonder on display and at that time it represented the very
latest and greatest in envelope folding technology. The poem begins with an
explanation of its powers:
ÒWith an output of
twenty-seven hundred
envelopes an hour
where prior but
three thousand were
made a dayÉ..Ó
Thus the envelope
machine (at that time) represented the ÒfutureÓ of envelope making. But the
poem does not rest there and very quickly moves to consider some of the
implications, some minor and more pressing, some directly and others
tangentially related to this machine:
three
thousand were made a day, cry
when you consider
the empty envelopes piled
on each of
our desks it is our
responsibility
to load and
send,
inserting therein a folded note
in an
action that
reverses
the
process of the envelope
stock
itself having once been
inserted flat into
the machine bed and
exiting
folded in the
automation of
the same paper-folding
mystery of
which it is said some
performers snap
jerking, flapping birds
from sheets of
paper in such a glare
of footlights, that folding
this quickly along
pre-laid creases
appears to be the
instantaneous
transformation of
matter. A toy,
an ornament, one
thousand cranes
folded in a plea for
longevity by she
afflicted with the
Òatom bomb
diseaseÓ
And so the poem
proceeds from 2700 envelopes an hour to the paper cranes folded in order to rid
the body of radiation poisoning. This motion, this movement from one idea,
place, or moment to the next is one of the defining characteristics of the
poems in Revolver. But in this sequence, we also see one of RevolverÕs most significant
characteristics: that of constellation, the rich connections among ideas,
images and language that Schiff draws upon to facilitate such movement.
For instance, Envelope
Machine, has within it the folding of envelopes, the paper cranes and bed
sheets of the radiation sick, and the hands of the dead; the folding done by
Òmaster foldersÓ once used to authenticate privileged communications from kings
to subjects; the folding of the metal in the construction of the kingÕs sword,
and ÒHis sword is origami, as / swords are. Its hammered folds have the / audacity never to unfold / an
envelope with no opening that / holds your life.Ó
And there are
tissue-paper roses Òlightweight as the man- / ifold paper / once used to make
carbon copies,Ó U.S. Dollar Bill folding: paper diamond rings, paper bow ties,
and eventually the paper currency printed today by De La Rue for various
nations worldwide, and, in the particular instance Schiff finishes with, the
twenty-seven 747s full of paper currency printed for and flown to Iraq.
The status of the
envelope machine as an object on display persists when one considers it as
similarly on display as the object of the poem itself. Likewise, many of these
poems place on display their own object, for instance ÒThe Singer Sewing
Machine,Ó ÒMcCormickÕs Reaper,Ó and ÒSilverware, by J.A. Henckels.Ó This
concept creates a sense of ÒfixednessÓ for these things; removed from the
world, cut off from time and space. This notion is significant, as it works in
opposition to the movement and connectedness Schiff creates in the poems
themselves.
And these poems find a
compelling sense of urgency in that opposition. Schiff doesnÕt seem motivated
to simply prove the interconnectedness exists. Instead, she strains to
articulate as much of that interconnectedness as the work will allow. The
lushness of movement and patterns in her work show, I think, just how
successful Schiff is, but then again, they also intimate how daunting and near
impossible such a task is.
One of the most compelling
challenges of Revolver is the negotiation of such shifts in subject, tone, and
language in relation to the relative stability of the initial subject. And not
just for the reader, but seemingly for the poet herself. Maybe itÕs how quickly, how substantially
the universe Schiff seems intent on cataloging expands, potentiality upon
potentiality, complexity upon complexity.
I get the sense that
Schiff understands all too well the complexity of her endeavor. After all not every poem is an object
from 1851, there is ÒLustron, The House America Has Been Waiting For,Ó ÒH5N1,Ó
ÒProject Paperclip,Ó and ÒHeroic Couplet.Ó There are other things to consider.
And while an argument can be made, even for the isolated ÒthingnessÓ of Couplet
or Paperclip, I think that these poems, the subjects of which have space (at
least temporally) between them and the Great Exhibition offer the reader some
great insight into the uncertainty of this artistic challenge.
In ÒProject PaperclipÓ
(in reference to Operation Paperclip, the classified recruitment of former Nazi
scientists into the American space program after V.E. Day), Òconfessions
fail
to retract,
lingering
like lines of poems
Chinese woodworkers once
carved into joinery of
portable furnishings
to guide reassembly
when the
maid charged with
dismantling chairs
in the rhododendron
garden is called away
before having time to
reconstruct
them in the fragrant
orchard, leaving lines intended
to lead the front legs
into the foreground
of the seat unresolved—The
Universe is—
and—Time is—never to
interlock
with Vast and EternalÓ
Herein lies at least
one more challenge for the poet: despite the best efforts of the designers to
ensure that everything lines up, the connection wonÕt always be made, even with
such obvious observations as ÒThe Universe is Vast,Ó or because of that.
Likewise in the sparest
poem of the book, the highly confessional ÒHeroic Couplet,Ó we come upon the
narrator with keys, but having rung the bell
É..so as to be received
by you
perceived location
actual location
Amidst such stability
there is still a swirling, amidst such lush poems, there might still be
space. This seems to me one of the
reasons to write poetry in the first place.